Joseph and the SFISC team has been amazing in this time of madness! Fantastic communication and dedication to connecting their winners to the professional world. I'm truly honored to be recognized by such an amazing group!
Fabulous festival and competition.
Love these script notes!
Nice to see a festival that supports serious writers taking on serious subject matter. Great competition.
GRAND PRIZE WINNER
Dr. Franka by Scott Nabat
Smalls by Dave Eisenstark
Land that We Love by Julian Awooner
Get the Strap by James Samuel
Tailspin by Emilio Corsetti III
Soul to Squeeze by Alex Arabian
Chupacabra by Aaron Willet and Jayesh Patel
The Sound of Silence by Thomas Louis Castiglione
This is the Last Time by Jeff Bretl
Run and Hide by Steve Crawshaw
Go, Doctor Banting Scott Sollars, Kyle Sollars, and Eric Sollars
Scuppernongs by Lynn Ashe
Little Things Mean a Lot by Michael Monteith
Winners received consultations with talent managers and production executives including industry pros at Fictional Entity, the Bohemia Group, Content House, Kersey Management, and LD Entertainment.
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How did you get started as a writer?
I moved to Los Angeles in 1992 to be a filmmaker. I did it. I got my wunderkind moment in 1997 at South by Southwest premiering my first feature, Other American Fables.
And then... Life. My brother died shortly thereafter. Followed by my mom, my dad, my brother-in-law. I was pegged as the son that could manage our family’s dissolution. Glad to be useful during those years but I came out of it pretty empty.
I stumbled into a career in post-production and a marriage. But then one day I looked up and 15 years had passed without writing a single paragraph.
The industry changed. Film went away along with the grizzled lab guys I loved talking to. I became a single dad raising a son. Learning to cook and do yoga and rise to the occasion of parenting an incredible kid.
It became time, once again, to write. Constructively this time. With the ingenuity of someone building a life and not just the inventive madness of a kid escaping an erupting volcano.
I was no longer the wunderkind but I went back to UCLA to study screenwriting. I found the patience to embrace criticism and characters that shined a spotlight on my own imperfections... Even learn to love them, a little.
How have your industry introductions been going?
I had a great phone meeting with Mark Saffian. He requested another writing sample and had some good thoughts on packaging my script. Mark read the entire script and had great thoughts on how to present and package the piece for sale. he also had some good detail notes, as well. These were all very helpful as I'm actively seeking management.
I truly did like speaking with both execs and I hope they felt the same. All of these connections and conversations are excellent opportunities for writers trying to break in and I thank you for making it so organized and easy.
Thank you again for setting all this up for me!
This competition is a class act. It's their primary purpose to support, endorse, advance and encourage their winning writers. I've experienced this with the phone calls, emails and promotion from them that left me feeling thankful and pumped up. They keep me informed when they forward my script to industry contacts. This win is more than just a pat on the back. Much, much more. Two thumbs up from me!
Fabulous festival and competition. Will enter again.
Great Competition! Great Opportunity! Will definitely recommend it to my peers.
Sending your work here, especially for a first time writer, can be very beneficial!
GRAND PRIZE WINNER
Shapeshifter by James Sweeney
Parousia by Todd Sorrell
Totem by Heidi Morrell
True Destiny by Joe Leone
The Tide by Mitchell C. Oppenheim
Mania by Greg Mania
The Sound of Silence by Thomas Louis Castiglione
Mantis by Janese Taylor
Seven Days by John T. Frederick
There is a Season by Stuart Creque
Secrets of the South by Walter Richardson & Kathy Berardi
McDonald’s Massacre by Brandon Young
Bad Persian Daughter by Sara Gharagozlou
Dr. Franka by Scott Nabat
Purlieu by Emily Fohr
2019's winner received personal introduction to three separate talent managers in addition to our grand prize winner receiving script notes and a personal consultation from none other than the top talent manager at Insignia Entertainment.
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1. What's your background? How long have you been writing? And what made you choose and or transition into screenwriting?
I have a background in visual design, specifically in motion design and have been a multimedia designer for around 5 years now.
I have been writing and telling stories for as long as I can remember. My family home is still filled with boxes of comic books and fragments of drawings from when I was about six years old. But my true passion for screenwriting came when I first started high school, spending way too much time in class jotting down ideas rather than notes.
2. What screenwriting training have you received? And what were some of your biggest breakthroughs?
My training in screenwriting consists of a few college courses, but for the most part, I’ve been self taught. Reading a countless number of screenplays and watching movies has been the best source of education for me.
3. What else have you written? What writing habits work for you? Do you write in short bursts or long shifts, in the morning or late at night, do you write at coffee shops, at home, or at the office when no one else is looking?
I have written a horror/thriller titled From Here which has done very well competition-wise over the past year and has earned me additional wins and finalist placements in contests such as ScreenCraft and WeScreenplay.
I love writing in the morning/afternoon after a good cup of coffee. It gives my brain a bit of the extra rush it needs to write. And if it’s a thriller script, even better! In my opinion, short bursts are always easier to stay consistent with. Even if it’s only half a page a day, progress is progress!
4. What's the title of the script you entered, and what's it about?
The title of the script I wrote is Shapeshifter . Per the logline, it’s about “ An aging Washington, D.C. police lieutenant who must tackle more than his own demons when a deceased foe suddenly returns, triggering both personal and public consequences in the nation's capital .”
5. Where do you look for inspiration and what inspired you to write this script?
I look for inspiration in every situation I find myself in. My mind likes to drift (some call it daydreaming) and I just play off ideas that come naturally. “What if this bus driver wasn’t the real driver and took us hostage instead?” Things like that constantly play in my mind.
I was inspired to write Shapeshifter after being completely unimpressed with all the suspense/thrillers that were coming out. I wanted to write a thriller that I could sit down and be completely infatuated with,
6. Describe your process? Do you outline your story first? Do you use notecards or a beat sheet? Or do you simply sit down and let it flow?
I absolutely and 100% believe in outlining my stories. I outline the entire plot and characters before I even begin writing the script. Once I have an in-depth outline, I begin writing the script. But the outline is just a guide, not a contract. I take the story whatever direction surprises me the most.
7. What was your experience with our festival? Are you happy with your involvement? What did you like most about your experience? And what could we improve on?
Although I wasn’t able to attend in person, the experience with the San Francisco International Screenwriting Competition has been nothing short of outstanding. With Joseph and his team, I’ve been able to speak with a Talent Manager and further solidify my growth as a screenwriter.
8. What are you writing now and what do you plan on writing in the near future?
I’m diving into the superhero genre, but with a twist. Who doesn’t like those?
9. Any advice for those about to dive into their first feature-length screenplay?
I would recommend humbling yourself in this medium. There’s no shortage of things to learn. If you’re not learning, learning, and learning, you’re gonna end up losing, losing, and losing. Be a relentless and steadfast learner.
10. Last, but not least, what have been your biggest victories since entering our festival? Any more awards, any representation, any options, connections, new opportunities, and or plans to move to New York or LA?
I was a winner at the Big Apple Film Festival screenwriting competition in the summer of 2019 for my script From Here. T hat script also brought me a semifinalist finish in both the ScreenCraft Horror contest and the WeScreenplay Feature Contest. Although I haven’t garnered representation yet, the gears have been shifting in that regard. Until that time, I’ll be grinding it out writing and learning more about the wonderful craft of screenwriting.
What's your background? How long have you been writing? And what made you choose and or transition into screenwriting?
I got a B.A. in Linguistics from the University of Hawaii. I started writing comic books as a kid, and through high school. In college I added poetry to the mix. I had a knack for rhyme, and i liked the ability to add unfettered mood to a piece, and I was a very moody college student! I think my confidence as a storyteller grew to a point in my 30s when I thought I should strive to reach the broadest market of all, on the silver screen. So I undertook the arduous task of learning the format for screenwriting, and that was not fun.
What screenwriting training have you received? And what were some of your biggest breakthroughs?
I've read dozens of books on the matter, and then attended dozens of seminars and classes. When screenwriting reached its fever pitch in the 90s, I was right there with everybody else at the Los Angeles Convention Center attending the hugely popular screenwriting conventions. I think my biggest milestone was repeatedly landing 3 scripts as finalists in the same film festivals. That gave me hope. I continued to work on brevity and conciseness in my scripts until I finally broke from the pack and began winning film festivals and contests. Atlanta Film Festival 2017 was my first, followed by a string of others: London Film Awards, NYLA IFF, Richmond IFF, Nashville, Depth of Field IFF, International Monthly IFF, Cannes Mediterranean IFF and of course San Francisco ISC.
What else have you written? What writing habits work for you? Do you write in short bursts or long shifts, in the morning or late at night, do you write at coffee shops, at home, or at the office when no one else is looking?
I published my first children's picture book in 2019, "The Frog with a Frown." I'm very pleased with it and have penned 4 others to follow. "The Cricket in the Thicket" and "The Mynah Rhymah" should come together this year. One is written in our local Hawaiian dialect, and to be accompanied by a serial cartoon. I find that when I drive or go for long walks -- both of which are accompanied by music -- I tend to birth concepts, ideas and dialogue liberally. Music unblocks me, and I have to jot down ideas or text them to myself at intersections or whenever I can lest I forget them all. They come at me in huge waves, and I learned long ago not to trust my memory! I absolutely LOVE removing myself from my home environment as well when it's time to write. I'm a frequent coffee shop patron. It excites me. It's like the modern library alternative, with a bit more of a creative energy in the air. That also tends to induce free-flow of thoughts and visuals. When it comes to scheduling a block of time to organize all those ideas into actual writing, late night is handsdown the best time for me. I have night owl DNA.
What's the title of the script you entered, and what's it about?
"Parousia" is a supernatural action-thriller that is often categorized under Scifi or Fantasy. I wanted to sneak into people's minds with probing questions that are frequently avoided, and so for that matter "Parousia" is my trojan horse. I hoped to instill a lot of soul-searching and self-evaluation on a personal level, which can lead to a macrocosmic view once the first step is settled. Questions such as "Are we created, or accidental? If created, were we created by design, or just experimental? In either case, what was the purpose our Creator had in mind? And oh yeah, that all presupposes the existence of a Creator! What's he like?" I didn't want to come at people waving a Bible in my hand. I like how movies such as Da Vinci Code and Lucy accomplished this, although somewhat superficially. "Parousia" is about Adam and Eve reincarnated through the ages as punishment for their sins, separated in each birth, but connected by a psychic bond which supplies them with paranormal abilities. Hunted by a mystic tribe allied with the devil, they try to find each other so that when they physically reunite, Creation will reboot, and they will have a 2nd chance at getting it right, i.e. outsmart the devil. The entire saga turns out to be a premonition beneath the Tree of Knowledge when Eve is being tempted.
Where do you look for inspiration and what inspired you to write this script?
There's something about the Creation story that just rings true. Nobody likes to give it any credence because they're afraid they'll be perceived as simplistic and a follower. But the world we live in is fraught with discord and hostility. No one wants to acknowledge their blind spot, that is, the cause of it all on a personal, and then universal level. If people can get past the fear of being labeled something, they might see with fresh eyes the concept of personal sin. I believe that we are "cracked mirrors", reflecting in part the beauty of God. Self examination is huge. Some call it prayer, but it's needed to gain the understanding that we are meant to aspire towards excellence and kindness. Society changes with the individual.
Describe your process? Do you outline your story first? Do you use notecards or a beat sheet? Or do you simply sit down and let it flow?
I do keep a journal to jot down ideas, but when I'm on overflow, I have to sit down and write. I will implement organizational tools such as notecards and calendars for timelines when my brain starts to get crowded. I have a pretty strong app in my head that keeps me organized. That's the fun thing about doing something you love, it's easy to remember stuff.
What was your experience with our festival? Are you happy with your involvement? What did you like most about your experience? And what could we improve on?
It was a thrill to get a phone call! That added so much legitimacy and validation. I think I tingled with blush when I read the flattering comments sent to the production company as well. We creatives definitely live for moments like that.
What are you writing now and what do you plan on writing in the near future?
I am writing a Young Adult fantasy novel trilogy called "The Christmas Witch Chronicles." I've been writing the first one, "Malakhim Wars" for several years now. It's the kind of epic undertaking that requires breadth and depth in order to flesh out the landscape, the same way Tolkien and C.S. Lewis created their lush literary worlds. It's about a colony of angels who guard a precious resource in the mountains, and a smattering of humans who manifest remarkable abilities around their 25th year. When a pair of brothers endeavor to understand their freaky new powers, they discover they're half-angel, and quickly learn they're not the only ones.
Any advice for those about to dive into their first feature-length screenplay?
Don't meander. Have a definite lesson or message to impart in your story, and make sure every character, scene and plot twist contributes to that message. Don't let others micromanage your style. Enjoy the freedom as a writer to accomplish that message or lesson. But if you're not effectively communicating that message, you may need mentoring and repeat coverage.
Last, but not least, what have been your biggest victories since entering our festival? Any more awards, any representation, any options, connections, new opportunities, and or plans to move to New York or LA?
I've decided to switch formats to book writing. I still want to reach the masses, and more than anything would love to see my stories reach people on film, but it's extremely difficult to get a screenplay greenlit, especially for a script like mine that's considered big-budget. Hopefully I will find an audience with both my children's picture books, and my ambitious YA novels. That's sort of a back door to the industry, albeit an increasingly crowded one. But the good thing is I enjoy writing and find the process of putting it out there exciting, which is itself a reward.